The Goor takes Phone in hand

Same scripts, shot again on a phone, walking and talking, so they read like a person instead of an ad. Bonus grabs only, never off the paid clock.

And the cheat code: one sentence per shot. The setup changes at every line, so you never hold more than a sentence in your head.

The moves

• One sentence per shot.
• Walk in on the first line, walk out on the last, so it loops.
• The hook is five big words on screen.
• Same outfit every reel, and the location does the talking.
• Coffee in hand. Busy hands make loose reads.

Where each script goes

Piece	The Goor take
The five thirties	Front halves as walk-and-talks, one line per stride, walk out on the HIDquote.com send.
Spot A	One joke per setup through the kitchen, coffee in hand.
Spot B	Four beats, four setups on a walk.
Spot C	Their fake-sympathy lines on the tight, your deadpan on the wide.
Spot D	One list item per spot, then sit down for the fed-up turn.

One good flub stays in. All of it is Chris Goor's playbook, @thechrisgoor, borrowed for a day.

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